TIGERS AND BLOGS
When I post a link to a page or someone’s blog I usually consider three things. One, their creativity and colors of their page and layout. Second, the details about every sing thing in their writing. When I read something, I like to be able to see it in my head as I read the words describing it. And last, their word choice and voice. If they show their personality through their writing, the story is one hundred times more interesting. It’s almost like they are standing right there and telling it to you personally.
An animal I would love to see in the wild is the tiger. Ever since I went to the Portland Zoo for the first time as a child, I have been in love with tigers. They are so pretty and add so much color to the wild forests and jungles. I think that they deserve to be in the wild because their nature is to not be tamed. They are cats, and cats like to run free and be independent.
dleogh1280 said,
June 3, 2009 @ 12:46 pm
I absolutely agree that writing with best word choices and tones of their own voice makes the writing much more exciting and lively! Cats want to be in the wild, run free, and be independent, but they need much more protection than tigers do. Some cats don’t want to be out in the wild, but I know they would love to, if there is no danger for them. I really do write more comments then I post something and pages!
-Sincerely from dleogh1280 in Mr.Millwards 7/8 intermediate class.